Thursday, 8 March 2012
It is intended that law students be encouraged to develop the skill of succinctness (apparently there are those who believe that lawyers have a tendency to say in ten words what could be said in three!!!!). The clients of lawyers deserve communication from those they have sought advice from, which is focused; understandable; and to the point!
So how can someone develop the skill of succinctness?
Part of the process of writing an essay involves revising, perhaps a number of times, what has been written. I believe that in journalistic circles the process is called “sub-editing” or “subbing”– For example
this sentence -
“He was not paying due care and attention when driving and this resulted in an accident.” (16 words)
Could be rewritten as - “His failure to pay due care and attention resulted in an accident” (12 words)
And then further revised to “His insufficient care and attention caused the accident” (8 words)
The more someone does this, the more succinct their writing style becomes – and focused upon what is essential and what isn’t really needed – which is the real purpose of having word limits!